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Me and My Lovely by ShyBugg Me and My Lovely by ShyBugg
Me and my girly, ~hetalia-fangirly

It's been a strong, love filled, 3 months of our romance. I'm happy to say I don't want it to stop.
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Well, you asked for a critique, so here goes.

There is no shading at all in this piece. It leaves the people flat and two-dimensional. You need to put fingers on your hands and toes on your feet as well. The girl has a nose but it's so light I can hardly see it. The guy doesn't have a nose at all. You should draw the folds in the clothing as well.

Sorry if this seems harsh, but you asked for a critique and this is my honest opinion. Follow my advice, practice drawing a person at least once a day and you will rapidly improve as an artist.
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Prussian-Kiwi Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
here's to another strong 3 months~
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ShyBugg Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup<3
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Numan1984 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Awww C:
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ShyBugg Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks<3
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Numan1984 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
You're welcome n_n <3 :huggle:
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ShyBugg Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconawwwplz: thankies for the huggle<3333
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Numan1984 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
:iconiloveyoutooplz: You're very welcome <333333333333333333333 :aww: :heart:
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ShyBugg Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^-^
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Numan1984 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
I'm sorry if I am acting too loving to you, because you deserve to love your lovely more D:
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ShyBugg Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh it's okay you aren't~ I love getting Huggles. You're acting really nice too~
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